I’ll take a break each weekend from my Poetry Conversations and try to share an original poem.
Today’s is a bit of silliness for your Saturday, part of a WIP tentatively titled ALL IN THE FAMILY. Imagine the typical family get-together when something spider-ish goes oh-so-wrong:
Spider on the Loose
Aunt Alma’s on the table
My spider’s on the loose
My mom’s not pouring gravy
My dad’s not carving goose
Aunt Alma’s on the table
She’s pitching quite a fit
How will we eat our meal unless
she gets down off of it?
“Oh my, oh dear, I’ll faint I fear,
if you don’t find him soon.”
Aunt Alma’s on the table and
she says she’s gonna swoon.
Aunt Alma’s on the table
It’s time to fill our plates
Search all the nooks and crannies
While everybody waits
I’ve scanned each spot, the food is hot
I’ll find him when I’m able
Can’t we just have dinner with
Aunt Alma on the table?
—Kristy Dempsey (all rights reserved)
Ha! So cute, and so funny!
Very funny. Absolutely delightful!
Excellent! I like the way you’ve made the scene so vivid and amusing, while keeping your narrator’s voice. That’s a lot in a few words.
Very cute and fun, Kristy!